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stumbling across the grand canyon as we embrace

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this poem is a virus,
so be careful not to let it
touch you

      like the soft fingertips
      of a wide-eyed girl on
      your lips, silent as if
      to say, shhh, do you hear
      this great thing between us,
      this aching nothingness
      in which my heart lingers
      and stutters?


      and oh, how it stutters.
      us - us-us-  he - and i. me and
      him. we. us.

      she is like a singer when
      she laughs, speaks in recitatives
      like she has an audience (you),

      quivers in her bones
      when you touch her.

      (there is just this girl and
       her hand on your face and her
       wide, wide eyes and there's
       nothing more you could ever
       want, nothing at all)
my audition piece for #poetry-book's scratch that contest! :la:
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0hgravity's avatar
flows nice.

I liked:
and oh, how it stutters.
us - us-us- he - and i. me and
him. we. us.


good luck with the contest :)