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sparklers

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dear, there are a thousand
fireflies under the big maple
tree in your backyard

and they keep blowing out
like birthday candles; over
and over they flicker feebly in the
dark corners of my vision

and i guess i have too many
wishes to be granted, and
i'm bringing tiny flames
back to life just in time to be

snuffed away,
and the cake

devoured
EDIT 21/03/2013: Trying to reorganize the gallery and fell upon this. Played with a few words and punctuation and spacing.
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iii. birthday
i've been struggling with this prompt for a while, and then last night my family and i were eating outside and it got pretty dark because we ate late and suddenly there were dozens of fireflies everywhere. it was amazing. my cat was thrilled.
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rlkirkland's avatar
Engaging visuals brought to mind; nice :)