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just wave goodbye

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April 5, 2013
just wave goodbye by =HillsOfMyst
Featured by BeccaJS
Suggested by littlemoonboots
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Literature Text

                                 dearest,
                          today         i was
                   the ocean.         
                 i tried to
               reach the
            forest but
         could only get
    as far as sand  before the
cratered  moon pulled me back again.


 
           ankles
       the       of
      at            shrie-
    i bit                king,
                           shivering
                            children and retreated
                               back into my cocoon of
                                 plankton and salt. i crashed and
                                  rushed, i tried to seize the sky but gravity                                
                                    yanked me down. it felt like all the forces in the universe were against me.
                                      maybe i had too much influence to be left alone lest i lure in
                                        some lonely young woman to seek my murky depths,
                                          hair floating like a halo of feathers.

                                                     
i emptied myself of all things human,
    filling up with water until i was a giant balloon
             and    let        the               tide              carry
                                                                                           me
                                                                                                               away

(that's
 when
 i
 under
 stood
 what
 it is
 to be
 a
 poet)
wrote this in april for napowrimo - day 10 i believe - and as you may or may not know i am editing all those poems so here i am. this one used to be one big wave but it looked really bad so after i did some editing on the content i got to work on this lovely format you see here. 
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StemmyBotanist's avatar
A beautiful scene, wrapped up in beautiful shapes! ♥ I love the frustration of the ebb and flow. [: