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this morning I woke in
the middle of the ocean after
a night of your gentle waves lulling
me to sleep,

you smiled at my wet lips
and heavy eyes and said
never regret this smile, never forget
this joy.

we linger here now, in between
worlds, washed up
ashore.
Tried some magnetic poetry. I had to add in a few words of my own or it wouldn't make any grammatical sense :shrug:
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DanielaIvanova's avatar
Such serenity! The association between sea and sleeping with a loved one is one that has crossed my mind as well but I could never dream of wording it so concisely and yet smoothly, aesthetically. What strikes me most is the sound of it - even when I read it aloud it sounds so soft and gentle, the words and letters you use fit the scene so well not only in meaning but in shape as well.