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it feels like 
trying to keep my stomach
from climbing out of my throat
and flopping to the floor

(now my insides lie wet 
and cold between us)

while I clutch my empty torso
and I can't breathe because
I go to sleep and no one is there,

because you reached into my chest
and pulled out my lungs and threw
them away

(I search every trashcan
you might have touched 
but I can't find them,
I still can't find them)

so I cover my eyes and pretend
you're not just an inch out of reach
general surgery
Just wanted to put this somewhere. 
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you drip
noiselessly
to the floor
between
my open
legs drip

my palms dry like
the rough rub of a new

book
drip

I press myself
into the wall
you read aloud

lips quirked
full
eyes closed
shut

as you drip
drip
into me
the floor, the wall, the bed
i didn't really mean to write this, it came out by accident.
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Well, it's nice to be back. I had a whopping 5,284 things in my inbox which I promptly deleted and waited patiently for new things to come in... and they didn't? It's been a whole day and there are only 6 deviations and that's just weird. I guess everyone's ditched this place / on vacation / both.

So, please recommend to me a writer (poet) that you've recently discovered or has recently joined dA, cause I have nothing to read and I want to check out some new writers.
also tell me what you've been up to :la:
if I am sticky like glue,
a bullet lodged in your spine

and nails like talons
that bite.

Forgive me for my eyes

and for tunnel vision
where you are the light.
Forgive me
a quickie.

not sure if i'm back. i'm restless. i want to write, but i don't know if i've still got it. we'll see. hi.
(rhyme was accidental, promise.)
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EphemeralEloquence Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a million for the watch! :heart: I appreciate it so much! 
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
my pleasure :)
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hey there :wave:
How are you, just wondering what are you up to :)
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:wave:
I'm doing alright. Thinking about returning to this nice place. How are you? :star:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Please do so, you are missed:)
I'm great been sometime I'm active again and loving it :w00t: 
Trying to keep up with my two year old :laughing: He does not sit down all day :la:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Happy birthday :party:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks lovely :blowkiss:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
How are you doing :hug:
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhappybirthdaycakeplz:
happy happy birthday to you! :iconflowersplz:
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
A belated thank you. :star:
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